The main thing that I don't like are the pieces of paper covering the name. If I had thought of this earlier I would've just printed a cover sheet with larger font.
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Concept is excellent. A tighter crop would help. Also, an all black background would've made the items stand out a lot more, than against the wall. Also, since we can't READ what's on the papers, I think having the helmet on top of the papers would've been better.
That just plucked my heartstrings. But I wish a little more effort would have been put into selecting a surface/background. And just a tad more contrast....
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