Personal opinion says that you may have needed a boost on that contrast bar. I think that would bring the ball to life more. Also, maybe add something to it. Like a flag or hole in the background or something. Just a thought for next time! :)
I think you tried to make this staged shot believable with your placement of the ball, but why not use it as an advertising piece and get that logo nice and straight?? Other than that, a color shot would have worked a little better but I can see why you went B&W.
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