Good idea! Just think that there are too much negative space on the left. BTW: IMO would be better to read this image from left to right (with the new candle on the left).
It's interesting, I believe I see what you were attempting. But for me, it's not quite working. I think one of the big things is time is often shown on the x axis as going now -> future. This seems to be going the opposite, which is really messing with my interpretation.
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