So much potential just misses. The excess space around the subject really diminishes its impact as does its slightly off-centered comp. Possible remedy: crops off both sides and comp centered on the tip of his nose. I wanted to give a 9 for beautiful tones and the purest silhouette in the challenge, but sorry just a 7.
Nice Alfred Hitchcock set up. The model's side profile even matches pretty closely. Is this what you had in mind or is it a coincidence? The Alfred Hitchcock thing I mean.
The coloration of the wine glass is nice, and the silhouette is very crisp. It's not a terribly exciting shot, but I suspect it will do well, as it's very technically well done.