Alright, the house is cool, and the black and white is fine and dandy but the pen just turns me off. I don't think it belongs there with the house. I'm not sure exactly what could have gone better, but, just not the pen.
Simplicity is superb and aided greatly by expanse of clean white background and use of everyday biro to provide scale. Just the presence of that biro has me imaging this little house and flowers on someone's desk - a momento of a special day or trip - a muse they look at when needing a mental break. Nicely composed. 9