I'm like this a lot. The grays are perfect, IMO, as is the composition.
This might have been better without the boat but then we wouldn't be giggling about the title! Nice one.
Something about the way they both are sitting conveys their relationship. And yet both are involved in their own activities. I could care less about the moving craft, so I'm not entirely sure why you chose to highlight it with your title.
I really liked this... then I saw the boat. For me, that took away the feeling the image was evoking and it also keeps drawing my eye to it. Other than that, this image captures the style well.