Thanks for all of the wonderful comments. I am very happy finishing 13th.
I havent been doing this long and for almost 0 editing, i really like how it turned out.
A very good moment caught! Not just the kiss, but the smile on the woman with the glasses, and the back turned of the guy in the hat. One wonders if he (the civilian in the hat) realizes he can't get the girl, but he'd been holding out hope until then....