You have two subjects in this photo, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but they don't go together very well since they aren't interacting with one another. The one on the right is even cut off. The reds and magentas are blown out (as is the white sky) and the background is too busy, so it distracts from the flowers.
There are a lot of things you could have done different to fix those things. You could have put a poster board or a sheet behind the flowers to give them a plain background, or you could have changed the angle of the camera to remove the sky and use the bush as a background, or you could have used a longer lens with a shallow depth of field to completely blur the background into oblivion. I think the image would have also worked better with just one subject, probably the white flower since you refer to it in the title. |