I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: And I thought I'd already found the bvy image! Although I can see this as paper on the ground, the overall effect is one of a discovered crime scene... A body barely covered along the edge of a path. The impression you have created here imbues the image with real power. The Sycamore pod is really important too - it shows us the scale of the image yet my mind refuses to accept the smallness of the face. That dichotomy fascinates.
Critical stuff: I can't think of anything that could be changed... It would be wrong to disturb the scene!
The "help me" and the picture of the girl combine to suggest a dark and unpleasant story. I'd almost think this was contrived, but it has the feel of an honestly found shot. Might be a bvy entry. He's good at spotting these sort of details in things usually overlooked.