Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) – Very well chosen. The main elements that catch my eye (name & flowers) are in the upper half & centered well. I am assuming you used a zoom blur. Good lighting for the desired effect. Did you try to center the flowers and use the same technique? It might have introduced more apparent motion because of the color.
(2) BACKGROUND – Quite good. No real structure, so the eye only pauses briefly on the other elements, like the snow. The rest is dark.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – Very good job and very good use of a blur using a zoom lens. Nicely centered on the “A” in Evans. Only minor complaint is the slight tilt of the frame that should have been corrected for in post processing.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL – I don’t see any changes I would recommend.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – Well done. I would guess that most viewers in a “quick view to vote” mode missed the subtly of the zoom blur, and thought you may have moved the camera, or used a “special filter”.
Jim msp
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