This is all out of focus (as if you haven't been told by now). It's the golden rule really, so next time try shooting further out if the range is beyond your camera, and use directional light to avoid the face-on glare from your light source. Good strong lights are always a much better substitute for flash.
As a subject, this is really not going to interest anyone so a dose of creativity would be recommended for your next challenge! Try looking at anything from a fresh perspective, very closely and you're sure to find some interest in it - more so than just depicting the camera itself.
Nothing will get you a low score faster than failing to achieve the very concept you took a picture of. This photo MUST be in razor-sharp focus to be successful.
this is really out of focus... and the glare's distracting, too. i think your idea was good, but it could have been executed in a more creative manner, maybe a different point of view?
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