I see what you were going for here, so I hope my suggestions can help you take this shot to the next level.
1) As I look at this, I get the feeling everything is tilted slightly to the left. This should either be perfectly straight, or intentionality tilted
2) The background is very bland. You could either light it so that it's super bright white and the creases don't show. Use a more interesting background (outdoors perhaps). Or even just use a different color.
3) Just seeing the tops of the objects is kind of a tease. I really want to see more.
Hope this helps! |