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I like the idea of this shot, but I find the composition to be very awkward, the way her elbows are cut off at the bottom of the frame, while I don't find the bit of sky at the top adds anything to the scene. I'd suggest framing differently or zooming in a little closer so that her magnified eye in the scope is what the viewer is drawn to. Lot's of great potential here, however. If you do a reshoot or re-edit, I'd love to see it. |