I took this picture in Hesperia high school's studio.
This is my first time entering dp challenge. Hopefully I do well and I want to thank Cesar and Justin for their assistance on the pictue.
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Seamless creative! Nice work. Not areally great light or defing focus nor picturely perfect. But a creative subject matter. I like it using a not to harsh light other time. But congrats to your exceptional idea.
Great idea and executed pretty well. Perhaps due to basic editing or some other constraints you left visible few artifacts here and there, but that aside, composition is good, diagonal you make is great. Hope to see some time more clean version - and don't cut yourself :)
Excellent idea and quite well done.
what lets it down is the wrinkles in the wall, and the use of on camera flash. Also the feet being cropped off, and table on the left being cropped. Fore some reason I always though t it was an ironing board.
Using a light source that simulates a window or ceiling light would have been better. However you get extra points for the obvious thought and work you put into the image. 7
Nicely done. I wish you'd been as detail-oriented with the lighting as you were with this great set-up. It looks like it's only one light, straight on, which makes the entire thing a bit flat. E for effort!
I really like your idea here, but at a closer look I feel it would have been better if you more carefully hid the objects propping up the step and the lamp.
I see you have been studying Gyban ... You did a pretty good job of this!! I'm sure you've problay got comments on this before but in case not, the lamp base is slightly askew and the cord loops up instead of hanging down. I DO LOVE how you flipped the end of your hair so it looks like it's hanging down in the air, Over all you paid a Lot of attention to detail, and I just really Like this!!
Certainly deserves marks for creativity, even if the execution is a little less than perfect. The wrinkles in the 'wall' really do detract from the effect somewhat.
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