Very snapshotish, the composition lends me to think that the pillows are the subject of the picture. I barley notice the toys on the chair. Try getting closer and lower to the subjects to give a sense of scale
Pay careful attention to reflective surfaces in the background when you are using the flash attached to your camera. The flare on the wall becomes the focus in this image. Cropping in closer to the objects, and using different lighting would make this much more interesting.
I think this photo could be greatly improved by throwing a white sheet over the seat as the background is a bit too distracting to my taste and makes it look a bit like an Ebay photo or snapshot.
Poor lighting and focus. Think about this: would you want this framed on your wall? I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but I'm sure you can produce better work than this particular photograph.