Feels voyeuristic which would be okay if the subjects were better technically rendered.
I should lighten up. This actually struck a chord with me because I took almost the exact same shot last summer. Nothing terribly exciting, but here it is anyway:
Hugely under-appreciated. One thing I don't like, though, is the in-line border. The fuzziness and blurriness works for me in terms of the story that you are telling.
Looks like there may be a story here, but the entire image comes off to me as so fuzzy and blurry, that I can't really get any idea of what may be happening or what you are trying to convey.