Greetings from the Critique Club
I am not sure why this image scored as low as it did as it is well photographed and composed.
The lighting circumstances appear challenging and you have done well to make an image here.
Perhaps the girls face is a little too deep in shadow and eye contact would have improved this picture.
The one comment received seems to have hinted at this as the reason that this image was low scored.
Personally I like it and find it to hit the challenge. The girl looking out of frame adds to the story telling
aspect but I think that it would benefit from space to the left for her to 'look into' in that case and also
slightly more detail in the face area.
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