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04/13/2011 07:10:05 PMPost actions
Yes, this was a striking idea, FocusPoint.
Two things. If you had eliminated the swimsuit detail (obviously raising the board to cover the necessities) and if you had eliminated the tiny board shadow, yes, this could and should have been on the front page. (Well, okay, make the board very black) It's a cute and original idea. Just, maybe a tiny bit soft on the execution.
Great model, fine pose, and as others have said, those skin tones are excellent.
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04/13/2011 12:06:38 AMPost actions
wow was this underrated. how this warrant below a 5 is beyond me.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
04/11/2011 08:48:25 PMPost actions
Cute, clever and wow is this well lit! You really got those Vargas skin tones to play up the pin-up girl imagery. Top five.
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04/11/2011 11:09:07 AMPost actions
The black board seems to draw the eye and this isn't appealing.
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04/10/2011 06:53:51 PMPost actions
Great idea border and photo
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04/06/2011 09:49:54 PMPost actions
This would have been great if her whole body was covered.
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04/06/2011 05:34:18 PMPost actions
nice..the shadow underneath the box bothers me slightly tho.
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04/06/2011 02:49:31 PMPost actions
I just hate censorship,lol
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04/06/2011 11:13:29 AMPost actions
Very cute. Love your lighting and the look of the photo
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04/06/2011 01:35:20 AMPost actions
Great lighting. I would love to get this kind of skin tone in the studio.
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