I don't know if I'd say the eyes were way overwhitened. It's a high-key image. So you'd expect them to be whiter...
Nice image anyway. I like the processing. Very nice high-key work. Black and white suits this very well.
Great high key portrait!! Only thing I can see to pick on is the catch light in her left eye (right side of the picture) . It is a perfect reflection of the softbox. I can even see the black fabric a touch... it just seems kind of unnatural. It is so big and I just keep staring at it. Everything else is awesome!