Plus points: the PP work in the face, the lively colors.
Things to improve:
1. I find the placement of the subject a bit centered. The tilt is awkward, imho. I think it is better without the tilt.
2. The styling can be better: the silver dust i the forehead area, which was sharpened looks like "pixellation". Do away with the necklace. The design of the sticker i the forehead does not look good.
3. The flowers in the background look like "sticking out" from her.
4. The background is too colorful it distracts my attention.
Like this pic a lot, I just wish those flowers didn't stick out behind you like that in all kinds of directions. I would think it might cost you some points because of it. I would have kept those flowers a little farther back so that they would fade some more due to the shallow DOF or just kept them all on one side of you (still farther back). They unfortunately distract the viewers because of where they are. Love your makeup and all the hard work you have put into it. You look beautiful!
i think that its the blonde hair that doesn't work for me. also the fact that she isn't looking at the camera, which isn't major, just i think it could make it better. :)
Nice clearity and colors!
Very beautiful shot. So many elements come together to really make this stand out. I love all the textures and colors, they really frame the model so well. Really nice makeup as well and a very interesting expression. This is one that has so much to explore and seems to look better the more I look, very well done.
Looks like Kita. I would have to say this is not your strongest work. Something seems disengaged. Also, it seems nitpicky but i think had you combed out the hair it would have added to the shot.
Brilliant use of colors, great level of details on the face, good use of tilt, great make-up work on the model. This should do well.
I do not know if you had planned for this - I see a burst of colors in the background and the colors on the model are totally opposite to the background. The use of colors on her lips, her clothes, hair color and skin tone are all subtle colors. Great results.
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