I feel there's a disconnect between her face and her body. Her face is made up, calm, and has shaping shadows. Her body is distended, lit flat, and a little overexposed.
She's beautiful. Love her intense gaze into the camera. Her pose is perfect, it shows off her body and the hand by her face causes you to get caught in her eyes. Normally I'm not a fan of facial piercings but she wears them beautifully. Even the nipple piercings are nice. The lighting you used falls perfectly on her. You did a marvelous job capturing all of her beauty.
Well, that certainly caught my eye! Think her bust is a little overexposed, you cant really see the contours around her breasts especially the left one. Otherwise, good shot.