Well spotted subject. Focus is tough on this subject, as you'll never get it all in teh focal plane. I think maybe a tighter crop would have gotten more out of the interesting light while also getting rid of some of the distractions.
Lacking some depth here sorry not well focused needs too be sharper i think you could have used another angle too shoot this flower i think you would have done better poor lighting too from the left side needs too light the whole subject..good try