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The smoke from those stacks glows, an eerie dark and dismal landscape that sparkles and glows.
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What Penny said. Something quite different with the poem. My lukewarm comment clearly only scratched the surface.
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On my first viewing it appeared too dark and the whites too white. But together with the poem, which I didn't know, it's just perfect - in fact rather luminous.
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A little too sharp, Maybe too dark, maybe not. Great composition.
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Nice and dark gothic industrial
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great contrast and use of b&w
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I like your composition, but why so low key? I wish there were some whites in this photo.
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really interesting would like to see it a little lighter
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Not enough pop! Looks muted and needs some more white
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Beautiful industrial photograph. Love the irony of the imagerly most people have of the title vs. the reality.
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NOT my idea of Jerusalem at all...makes for a great industry challenge
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I love the lightness of the smoke. I wish there was just a tad more definition and light on the factory. Nice use of B & W.
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