Tippy, but this could be a good thing for this photo, it gives you an uncomfortable feeling about time passing... the ceiling at the top left, and the door frame at right distract from the subject, and may take away from the artistic tip of the clock. because instead of just the clock being tippy, it is now the entire room, and it just makes you wonder if this was taken on a cruise ship, or something... Hope this makes sense!! :)
right edge needs to be cropped. actully it would look nicer if the whole photo was cropped too much empty space on the sides. i like the black and white
I don't know what you were wanting to achieve for your vision, but the problems I see are poor focus, tilt not corrected, lack of overall tonal range, and no real "interest" in the shot IMO.
The motion blur, combined with the tilted subject and overall darkness makes this image unappealing to me. The distracting door frame (?) on the right should also be cropped out.
I have to say it, terrible shot, crooked, badly composed, badly lit.
The door frame or whatever it is and ceiling should have been out of shot.
Preparation for the shot is my main criticism, sorry if I am too blunt but it needs saying for you to improve.
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