a little dark, but i know this is hard to catch, i've tried! nice job! maybe crop off the kid standing to the right in the background which would put the subject a bit off center, too.
Sure wish this wasn't so dark. It is a really good photo otherwise. What would have been neat is if you could have used the flash and gotten close enough for it to be effective--that would probably "black-out" the background and make the white uniforms really stand out.
Well stopped motion for such poor lighting. I would have tried standing near the window so it's light was striking the side of the people nearest to me. There's also a ton of compression artifacting, I notice that the picture is 30K when it could be saved up to 150K, you're losing a lot of detail you don't need to be.
Needs a bit more lighting! IMO,the composition would have benefitted from the camera being slightly more to the left, thus bringing the background fight into view.
Great action shot -- though the lighting is obviously tough to work with. Maybe experiment with different manual settings getting ready for this shot to try to get as much light as possible.
I would have tried to adjust the contrast to bring out more detail in the foreground figures while trying to maintain the overall ambience, but that's just my style...
I like the stopped motion concept of this photo but I believe the lighting needs a little adjustment. The overall photo is a little dark. I believe that this particular shot would have been better framed in a vertical photo rather than horizontal.