by nice I mean I like it and I don't often comment on the model poses (nor, obviously, do I take them so coming from me is different than what some of the ofther professionals might tell you).
But to me the lighting is perfect, the dof works, the composition is excellent and it's very tasteful. I'm surprised this didn't do better.
The Jim Bean placard behind her drink is killing this for me, and so is the white sign on the wall. For this kind of shot, you gotta be in control of the details...
It's comments like these I appreciate.
FWIW, the white sign in the background was edited out of the image I submitted months ago to the bar owner, but the Jim Beam bar napkin holder was not.
The Jim Bean placard behind her drink is killing this for me, and so is the white sign on the wall. For this kind of shot, you gotta be in control of the details...
This image is about details, and most are great. But why, o why didn't you get rid of that tiny bit across her iris which makes it look like she's not looking at the camera????