This is a great idea but there are a couple of things that would improve it. Firstly the main bar of chocolate is out of focus and that makes it kinda hard to look at also loose the date from the camera it is very distracting.
As much as this is a good idea, the focus is off. Nothing is really in focus. The choice I believe would have been the bite marks of the chocolate. Heard it already, I imagine,You can turn off the date stamp.
I quite like the composition. The focus is a bit soft. I think it needs sharper focus on the foreground subject. The date stamp detracts from the image. Well thought out and composed though.
This photo saddens me because I like it a lot, but there are a few serious problems with it. First, it's extremely blurry. Out of focus, probably. I would have focused on the chocolate bar with the bit out of it in the foreground. Second, there is that ugly date stamp on it. What's with that? I've never seem that in a challenge entry before.
What kind of camera stamps the images with a date?! Maybe a video camera?
Great idea & composition. Unfortunately, technical problems kill it.
I know it is difficult to make really interesting photo of chocolate. But your is not in good focus and you should try to get rid of the date of pictures you are posting.
Wow! The date stamp really adds to this composition. Oops, I meant to say adds nothing to this composition.
Could you really not be bothered to do a reshoot without the date? While you were at it you could have made sure it was in focus. Sorry if this is harsh but this is just too careless to even consider.
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