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Comments Made During the Challenge
07/27/2004 11:48:19 PMPost actions
Nice. I would like to see the focus just a touch more to the right on the textured area of the chocolate. The "soft" focus on the lips does work well
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07/27/2004 08:23:20 PMPost actions
very good capture. good crop and composition.
would have like to seen a bit sharper lips.
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07/27/2004 01:40:09 AMPost actions
eating chocolate is a pretty common picture in this challenge, bit the focus in this picture is interesting
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07/24/2004 06:10:13 AMPost actions
Great use of depth of field. The lighting works well too. The subject matter certainly gets pushed forward. Its a very stark image, no subtlety about it.
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07/22/2004 10:22:58 PMPost actions
I can see this on a billboard.
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07/22/2004 10:22:14 AMPost actions
I don't like the teeth in this picture. I find they take away from the photo. perhaps if her mouth was closed it would have made a better shot.
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07/21/2004 03:53:42 PMPost actions
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07/21/2004 02:26:50 PMPost actions
good idea but the colors are off, especially the skintones, maybe needs some brightness and a bit more saturation
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07/21/2004 01:55:16 AMPost actions
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07/21/2004 12:36:30 AMPost actions
i unsuccessfully tried to do the flake myself for this challenge... i like yours a lot - the mouth, the wrapper and all... very nice... 8.
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