I like the dramatic lighting and the narrow DOF, the effect is almost romantic. I'd crop in a bit tighter to the chocolate. There are some odd colors and graininess to the shadow at the back left - perhaps a bit to dramatic in the color adjustments? Not a big deal. 6
It might be chocolate, but it hardly looks like it. It doesn't scream yum, and I would prefer a photo of chocolate to scream yum!!! It's a bit blurry too and the color is not too enticing. THe crop is nice though.