Not a bad image, but a tad too small to do it justice. I would like to know just what you did in the postprocessing since the skies seem rather gray but there is a goldish hue to the image... almost like you adjusted the white balance. Good luck in the challenge.
I see where you're going and I like the idea, but the subject is unclear to me. Regarding the horizon, the only discernible horizontal line is interrupted by distracting and repeating vertical lines.
Nice tones. Maybe going for an old-timey photo, and it's working, but I still want to see it big, because it's a great shot. Big and grainy would be even better.