Alot of subjects here that are asking for the attention and focus. the focus seems to only be sharp around the cake and pie, which leave the others stranded. My eye expects to look at the others and see them clearly. WB too warm.
I think the composition would be better without the gold bar of chocolate. The background is a bit tilting to the left (the edge of the table), and there are too many thinkgs on this photo. Fewer would be more effective, like the syroup, the cakes, without the glass and the bar on the bottom, or something like that. (4)
I think you tried to do too much with this one. I like the idea of the "Got MIlk" but I think the point would have come across better with t closer shot of just that yummy looking cake and a cold glass of milk. Also, the yellowish tone here I think makes the milk (or is that a milkshake?), and the mie topping much less appealing. I like you idea, though.
Great lighting and color. To me, this picture would have been better with just the cake and the milk. The cake is gorgeous and looks delilcious - so does the pie but there seems to be too many chocolate things in the photo.