Good idea, but I would like the impression of the kids waiting for the bread to be toasted. The kids might be watching the toaster, but the angle makes it look otherwise. Btw. The toaster is off and I can't see any toast. It's a good idea though :)
different interpretation of the challenge topic (i thought there would be some of those). Looks more like a snap than well thought out. What's with the white border at bottom?