I like what you were going for here. I have a few suggestions I think that could have made this better:
* Her smile only looks half-hearted. It says "what am I doing here" instead of "This is a lot of fun"
* The flash just doesn't feel right. I think it's the cool color against the warm color of the setting sun. A gel to color the flash may be able to help. |
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