The lighting looks odd to me.
Foreground light - It's going straight for boobs! Remember eyes naturally are drawn to bright spots. Eyes are also going to naturally go to boobs. I'd say there's no need to have a light pointed at her boobs. The viewer will get to the cleavage on their own I'm sure of it.
Background light - It's hitting her thigh. Is that just extra light from the foreground that spilled back?
I'd also recommend she get a Tetanus shot. |