I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: As soon as this came up on my screen it communicated 'cleavage' - probably says more about me than your image. Once that image stuck though the small circular elements became some transparent gossamer... Certainly the shapes here hold interest and I commend your for in something so unconventional.
Critical stuff: This feels very minimal - in that it has minimal information with which we can build a picture. The near grey coloration does little to help out. I think perhaps a coloration other than grey may have worked a little better.
Overall: Interesting but not very accessible - like a private joke that we are not part of, I think the viewer is excluded a little here. I'm not sure that's ever a good thing.
I feel that there is not enough of a hint of what this really is in order to do well, also the contrast is either not enough or needs to be totally high key...still there is something interesting about it!
I have to admit I'm very confused by this image, it looks as though the camera has been moved during exposure (deliberately I assume) but the end result lacks any clarity, sorry