Good use of fill flash to bring out the details in her hair/face, without overdoing it. I like the choice of B&W here. I also think vignetting would have been a good choice for this photo.
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LIke the shot , B&W was a good choice like to see this again with the model facing the camera , in my opinion this would give strength to the image.