She's beautiful, very modern day Cinderella. I think if you'd have "dirtied" her up a bit it would have added a bit more fairy tale to the shot. Lovely image, though. Good luck.
The placement of the hand holding the candle interferes with the broom handle. Makes you have to study it to figure out what's what. I do like the sepia and the frame works with the sepia. Nice and sharp.
Love the idea. The title really explains the shot. I'm not sure the heavy sepia works for this image, though. I also think the wardrobe doesn't help to sell the idea. Cinderella was either in maid's clothes (which would require something other than that adorable minidress - and definitely some sort of hair treatment other than gorgeous glam) or princess-wear. But the lighting is great, and that corner she's in is a terrific set-up.