from a technical perspective, nice shot. from a creative perspective, the words don't help the picture tell a story. maybe if you had worked in a reflection of a large person?
Your focus is off, and this is not a creative image. The horizon is also crooked and the bottom right corner is too bright. Remember the challenge: "Take a photograph where complete words -- not just individual letters -- play a creative role in your composition." There is no creative role here, just a picture of the art already used on the can.
nice picture, but this pc to me is not meeting the challenge. I know it has words but it looks more like a comercial for Coca Cola Company. Scoring real low with me.