Everything about this image is awkward, and I can't tell if it is intentional, but it doesn't really work for me as there doesn't appear to be a reason for the awkwardness other than to be awkward (sheesh! how many times can a person use awkward in one sentence!!!!!)
Also, a little more attention to the details of the setting would be nice (here we are drawn to the imperfections on the back wall - lines, scratches, holes), and the band across the bottom bisects the image rather than contributes to it.
But clearly, something is working since it compelled me to write a whole essay! |
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