I like a processing here and I think this should have scored a whole lot higher. Really great perspective from above, and obviously great model and wonderful expression.
Hi Cory! lol ok so I dont like the model - but I see what you were going for here.... so here is my comments
Photo set up: the angle is nice - the colors work well - and the processing/crop works decently -
Model: her pose makes her legs look fat - her teeth look weird- and those shoes do not work on her feet - and the part in her hair does not do anything for her.
You have really captured a wonderful attitude here - coquettish, playful yet removed, like she's telling her best friend something embarrassing about you. My only gripe is that the floor seems oddly blurred and distorted.
While the angle of the camera is very unusual, it makes the subject look very short and small, especially with so much background. As such, I don't think I like the angle of this. Did you HDR the floor? It looks kinda funny and I think it takes away from the model.
Not a bad shot but I do have a few complaints. The chair is not square to the tiles and thus the lower bar draws my eyes down. The over sharpening/editing makes the chair seat look separated from the floor, like it was photoshopped in. The crop is uneven and detracts. The goods ... the color is good, lighting is pretty good and the model looks well edited. This is a 6 in my book.
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