this is gonna sound soooooo dumb - but I think the nose ring should have been taken out. that's the first thing that caught my eye and it kind of doesn't flow with the "riches" theme for me. unless this is what all the rich kids are doing these days :)
just nitpicking tho - I think it's a really good shot.
Beutiful. I have to agree with the earlier comment about the pose. Is she sitting or just holding herself up with her hands? Love it all except for that.
As usual a well-thought out and executed portrait.
Just a thought - the model's pose seems a tad awkward and puts her slightly out of proportion. And that reaction is probably 'just me' but I'll stick it out there anyhow..
:))