Doesn't feel real. Girl's hair is too perfect and legs are too clean which contrasts with the rest of the image and thus makes this look posed rather than photojournalistic.
Far too contrived. Not enough spontaneity for this challenge IMHO. Looks like a healthy middle-class girl with a bit of makeup. Technically nice though.
nice environmental portrait. the coins, though, speak more to a set up shot than a possibly found shot. in pj, the rule is about telling the story, not making the story...