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A good tonal range of white through to black, and an interesting but not confusing range of textures. I broadly like the composition, but do feel that there are areas that could be improved - the frame is filled, giving a fairly rectangualr feel to the composition; I wonder if a triangle towards the top, perhaps through differing heights of bottles/jug, might give a more dynamic feel. The diagonal placement of the chopping board and rolling pin work well. I would like to see what it would look like with the bowl of eggs placed to the right - as it is, they are the first thing I see, and then my eyes wander across the frame to the bowl and scoop which, whilst important to the 'story', are nothing like as aesthetically pleasing. |