Hmmmm. This has really good "bones", but isn't quite there for me. I think more contrast would have made it pop more, and I'd love to see this in color. Honey just begs for color :-)
I know I've seen this before and my impression was the previous felt more artistic but this seems better executed. I feel this needs colour to reach it's full potential. I still like the way this meets the challenge, which is better than most I've seen so far. Well done! 7