Critique Club
COMPOSITION I liked the composition of this image but feel that the top could have had more cropped off it.
BACKGROUND - A little bit too grey on the left edge
CAMERA WORK -TECHNICAL - Very good the shadow and impression of speed that the objects are giving has been very well handled, lighting is good
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - The background blending is a bit uneven Top left corner darker grey than bottom and middle left.
YOUR OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I thought this was a very good entry I gave it 8 overall
lines and repition work. the blurring of the blue thingy in motion is neet. and the dirtiness around the edges is actually a nice touch, and a change from the sterility of a lot of mostly-white images you normally see here. 9
I can imagine how many comments you're getting about combining this week's challenge with the next one!
I do like this very much - the diagonal, the saturated blue and the motion are all very appealing.
My only criticisms would be the greyness to the background at the top left corner and that I think the hoop-things could be just a touch higher and to the left - not much so as I don't mean centred at all - I like the off-balance composition - but just a touch.
Great capture!
9, Kavey
Nice motion shot. Oh, and there's blue too! What are those things? Some sort of game pieces? Neat shot. Good lighting and nice job with the invisible bg. ~indigo997
This would have been a good picture for this weeks challenge of motion! Very nice and simple, love the blue shadows they give off, and its a very nicely done photo. Love the blank space!
I see the three are beautiful blue napkin rings (?) but can't figure out what the moving object is - too blurred. Too much empty space for me. What is clear is good. Decent shot. PTL
Great shot. I think I would like to see it with a slightly quicker shutter speed, and if the background was a bit whiter (which is tough to get) it would have looked better. Overall superb picture. Well done.
Nice photo. I like the composition and the motion...you're going to wish you would have saved this for next week. there's something about all that white that's really distracting but I don't know how you would change that without affecting the composition of the rings.
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