Challenge:Words (Basic Editing I) Camera:Olympus D-510 Zoom Location: in my house, in my room, my notebook Date: Jul 9, 2004 Aperture: 1:2.8 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/6 second Galleries:Emotive, Macro Date Uploaded: Jul 9, 2004
the picture has a yellow hue over it which could have been corrected with color balancing it, maybe you wanted it like this, but the lighting is a lieetle flat could maybe have been cool to use a flashlight to give it mysterious lighting
Brilliant idea and I like the focus, DOF & colours too. I am not too sure about the cropping though. I think you could have taken a bit off from either side. I think the line ' I won't cry' is enough to make the impact. It's a very powerful image. Superb job. Best of luck.