First attempt at a self portrait, I took this shot as a test to set up a shot for another challenge (Mythical Creature). I used a single light source off camera (Nikon SB-600 flash)through an umbrella.
In PS CS5 I converted from RAW, adjusted to black and white.
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Tones a bit to flat in this B&W. Very soft image. Im no pro in portrait but this is what bothers me a bit on this. Not sure where the focus lies and then you have the big empty black space at top. Would like to see what the pro's think of this and I could learn from it.
Lighting is pretty good, composition.....a bit too much negative space at the top for my liking.....but what hurts this the most is really the lack of sharpness (especially in the eye area). - 5
This is a good overall photo, but if I may I am going to critique you. There is a lot of open space above your head. Also, on my monitor, it appears a bit dark.
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