The black stripe on this is quite distracting.. Almost looks like the shots you get when you have the shutter sync wrong on an old SLR... the over exposed highlights on the fingers are also very distracting from the lenscap, a diffuser on the flash, or bounced flash would have worked much better for this I think.
this picture would work better with a little less flash and a little more focus. also, the black area on the left could be positioned differently to make it add to the picture.
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