I'm happy that I've improved on the original, certainly from a technical point, but this is not likely to score well in what is essentially a free study, and this is a mid-5 effort at best. Nevertheless, I found the process useful and I'm pretty happy with the result.
[Post Challenge Edit]
Wow, cracked a six! Glad some people liked it, one of my most satisfying shots of late.
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