I'm starting to recognize this young lady. This is going to be the entry from Kenskid. The can of oil does not quite fit with the rest of the portrait, and I think that incongruity is part of what I like about it.
love the old style of advertising shot. I think you could have done more with the lighting, the detail in the shadows is non-existent which is fine for the coat, not so much for the hair, well at least for me. I would have also like to see the lighting a little bit more even across the face a reflector on the left of frame would have done the job.
Putting the new umbrella to quick use, I see :)
Nice shot- it's got a very good "stock" feel to it, with the white background and the very even illumination of the oil.